三是突出推进全体人民共同富裕。中国式现代化是全体人民共同富裕的现代化①。《纲要(草案)》着眼建设生育友好型社会,健全人口服务体系;办好人民满意的教育,劳动年龄人口平均受教育年限提高到 11.7 年;加快建设健康中国和体育强国,人均预期寿命提高到 80 岁; 积极应对人口老龄化,养老机构护理型床位占比提高到 73%;促进高质量充分就业,完善 收入分配制度,健全社会保障体系。着眼②缩小区域差距和城乡差别,加快农业农村现代化,持续巩固拓展脱贫攻坚成果,优化重大生产力布局,深入推进以人为本的新型城镇化。着眼②促进人民精神生活共同富裕,弘扬和践行社会主义核心价值观③,大力繁荣文化事业,加快发展文化产业,提升中华文明传播力影响力。
3) Advancing common prosperity for all
Chinese modernization is characterized by common prosperity for all. The draft Outline proposes the following tasks: building a childbirth-friendly society and improving population services; developing education that meets the people’s expectations and raising the average years of schooling among the working-age population to 11.7; moving faster to both advance the HealthyChina Initiative and build a country strong in sports and raising life expectancy to 80 years; proactively responding to population aging and increasing the share of nursing beds in elderly care facilities to 73 percent; and promoting high-quality full employment, improving the income distribution system, and refining the social security system. To narrow disparities between urban and rural areas and between regions, we must accelerate the pace of agricultural and rural modernization, continue to consolidate and expand our poverty alleviation gains, improve the distribution of major productive forces, and promote people-centered new urbanization. To ensure a rich cultural life for all, we must promote and practice the core socialist values③, boost cultural programs, accelerate the development of cultural industries, and extend the reach and appeal of Chinese civilization.
①“中国式现代化”是“xx现代化”:同指现象,只译一次【汉英、英汉翻译皆适用】。比如:he is a rich man他很富有。②逻辑关系:表目的。遇到“着眼”、“围绕”大多是表目的。③中英文定语顺序不同,英文中含义越核心,位置越靠近中心语。双语词汇积累:生育友好型社会:a childbirth-friendly society平均受教育年限: the average years of schooling劳动年龄人口:the working-age population人均预期寿命:life expectancy人口老龄化:population aging
养老机构护理型床位:nursing beds in elderly care facilities收入分配:income distribution社会保障: social security缩小差距: narrow disparitiesbetween A and B重大生产力:major productive forces社会主义核心价值观:the core socialist value提升中华文明传播力影响力:extend the reach and appeal of Chinese civilization
四是突出统筹发展和安全。安全是发展的前提,发展是安全的保障。《纲要(草案)》贯彻总体国家安全观,着眼推进国家安全体系和能力现代化提出多项任务举措。增强粮食、能源资源等供给保障能力⑤,粮食综合生产能力达到 1.45 万亿斤左右,能源综合生产能力达到 58 亿吨标准煤。统筹推进房地产、地方政府债务、地方中小金融机构等风险有序化解⑤。提高公共安全治理水平④,有效维护社会安全稳定。
4) Ensuring both development and security
Security is a prerequisite①for development, and development provides a guarantee for security. Guided by a holistic approach to national security, the draft Outline proposes various tasks and measures to modernize China’s national security system and capacity. It highlights the need⑤ to improve supply capacity for food, energy, and resources, and envisages increases in overall grain production capacity to 725 million metric tons ②and in overall energy production capacity to the equivalent of 5.8 billion metric tons of standard coal. It emphasizes the need⑤ for coordinated, well-sequenced steps to address risks arising from real estate, local government debt, small and medium local financial institutions, and other areas. It also calls for enhancing public safety governance to effectively safeguard social security and stability.①prerequisite:【C】 ~ (for / of / to sth)· something that must exist or happen before sth else can happen or be done先决条件;前提;必备条件②increase【n】in sth【在某方面的增长】to ...【达到某个水平/数值】③equivalent:【n】 ~ (of / to sth)a thing, amount, word, etc. that is equivalent to sth else相等的东西;等量;对应词
④范畴词。“治理”本身包含了“水平”的含义。⑤need 属于英译中常见的“显化”处理:中文常直接用动词表达政策导向,如“增强”“推进”“提高”;英语则常用 highlight/emphasize + the need to… 来表达“强调必须/有必要做某事”。注意上下文联系,“纲要”与“增强粮食、能源资源等供给保障能力”、“统筹推进房地产、地方政府债务、地方中小金融机构等风险有序化解”这两件事之间的关系是什么,“纲要(草案)”不是行动实施者,不能直接“增强供给保障能力”或“推进风险化解”;它能做的是提出、强调、要求、规划这些行动。所以应该是“纲要”突出/强调了有必要“增强……能力”和“推进……”。双语词汇积累:
总体国家安全观: a holistic approach to national security地方中小金融机构:small and medium local financial institution【中英文定语顺序不同】