
渐进式延迟法定退休年龄改革稳妥实施。城乡居民基础养老金月最低标准①提高20 元,在全国实施个人养老金制度,开展养老服务消费补贴试点。持续推进社会救助扩围增效,加强重度残疾人托养照护,完善困境儿童福利保障②措施。提高优抚标准。发展文化事业和文化产业,③旅游业活力显现1,国内出游人次增长 16.2%2,入境旅游人次增长 17.1%3。④成功⑥举办第九届亚洲冬季运动会、第十五届全国运动会,群众体育赛事和全民健身活动蓬勃开展。The reform to gradually raise the statutory retirement age was advanced in a prudent manner. Minimum basic old-age benefits for rural and non-working urban residents were increased by 20 yuan per month. The private pension system was implemented nationwide, and trials on elderly care service vouchers were launched. We delivered more extensive and effective social assistance, strengthened care and support for people with severe disabilities, and improved welfare and protection for children in need. Subsidies for entitled groups were raised. Cultural programs and industries were boosted. Domestic tourist trips⑤ increased by 16.2 percent and inbound tourist trips by 17.1 percent, illustrating the vitality of the tourism sector. We successfully hosted the 9th Asian Winter Games and the 15th National Games. We also witnessed a strong surge in recreational sports events and public ⑦fitness activities.①范畴词。②注意是并列关系。③注意前后要断开,后面说的是旅游业。④总分关系:1是总,2、3是具体数字体现。可以是原文的这种结构,也可以是1,with:The tourism sector showed renewed vitality, with domestic tourist trips increasing by 16.2 percent and inbound tourist trips by 17.1 percent⑤此处的trips也可以替换成visits。⑥我认为此处的“成功”不应该翻译。
在外交语境中,host 本身就带有“顺利举办”的默认含义。什么时候“成功”可以翻:后面有量化或结果支撑:成功举办……并取得一系列成果successfully hosted …, yielding / resulting in …;强调突破或克服困难在复杂形势下成功举办successfully hosted … despite / amid …⑦public = 面向公众的 / 公共的⑧注意介词的使用,已标黄。
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渐进式延迟法定退休年龄:gradually raise the statutory retirement age稳妥地:in a prudent manner城乡居民:rural and non-working urban residents最低基础养老金:Minimum basic old-age benefits个人养老金制度:The private pension system重度残疾人:people with severe disabilities困境儿童:children in need提高优抚标准:Subsidies for entitled groups were raised全民健身活动:public fitness activities群众体育赛事:recreational sports events